Tuesday 8 May 2012

my weirdest dream!!!


My weirdest dream!!!



I was in the garden. Meanwhile, I came for a walk to the garden. There was not a signal soul in the garden.

At the same time, swinging, suddenly I show a figure behind me.  When I saw there was nobody. I really frightened. I ran to my car to go home as quick as I can. I draw for a while, and something was moving on my car mirror. And then the ghost kills me!

        Aaaaaaaaa!!!! And when I get up I was sweating!
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3 comments:

  1. It was nice and full of mystry. Check your grammer mistakes

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  2. It's really nice to see that you are trying to make your work interesting Muskan. However, you need to put your thoughts into words properly. This is called 'articulation' or being 'articulate'. May be you can do some research on this?

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  3. That's quite scary Muskan!! I'd call it a nightmare not a dream!

    Can you explain to me the difference between signal and single?

    A good effort.

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