tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2255539319838915243.post449420826032682875..comments2012-05-18T23:11:34.847-07:00Comments on muskan's blog: a big scary shocking dreamMuskan's bloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04537186632797678634noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2255539319838915243.post-21149594117485698272012-04-30T04:06:16.422-07:002012-04-30T04:06:16.422-07:00* The 'person' well described
* 'round...* The 'person' well described<br />* 'round shaped'<br />* 'He had four eyes..'<br />* 'Who are you?'<br />* Check the inverted commas while using direct speech<br />* Well ended<br /><br />Very creatively written Muskan - I can see that your reading is having a very positive influyence on your writing. :)Archanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13524035252228613253noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2255539319838915243.post-10631448737095970172012-04-30T01:59:38.831-07:002012-04-30T01:59:38.831-07:00Edit your work based on the feedback givenEdit your work based on the feedback givenArchanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13524035252228613253noreply@blogger.com